3. 谁能帮我改改我的英语日记我在学英文,这是我写的日记,我知道英 One day,I just woke up in bed,The sky looked a little gray outside of the window,Is it dusk now or dawn?when I slept at about 13:00 I had gone 30 hours without sleep,I have just got 5 hours sleep?or Have I sleeped for 17 hours?I still feel very sleepy and want to sleep more .Children played and laughed outside the window ,walking their way Are they back home or on the way to school?I heard the noise of the iron door opened,Was the little restaurant which sold breakfast or evening cakes begin to do its business?With this kind of thought in my mind .I dropped into sleep again.When I woke up again,The sky still looked a little gray outside the window 。
4. 英语日记 20篇 July 6 2009
【学英语日记怎么写】It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.
这是第一天 ， 我们的暑假 。我们大家都非常高兴 。为什么？因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事 。我们很空闲.虽然我们有一些功课 。但是 ， 我们可以完成他们的若干天 。其余的时间我们可以好好利用 。我的上帝！我们已经很疲惫后很难学习 。在冬季假期 ， 我希望能有充分的很好吃的食物 ， 以补充自己 。最后但并非最不重要 ， 我会好好休息 。
July 9 2009
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don't feel lonely. But I didn't do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
这是我们第二天的暑假 。我感觉很好 。我觉得我很自由 。我有很多时间做我喜欢 。我的父母都在中山 。所以 ， 我独自生活 ， 但我并不感到孤独 。但是 ， 我没有做什么特别 。我住在家里看电视 。噢！我写了英语日记组成 。这是我的功课 。今天 ， 我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫 。现在是吃晚饭 。我必须去！我非常渴望 。
July 10 2009
5. 英语日记怎么写 英语日记一般记录某一天发生的事件 ， 或者是自己感受最深的一件事 ， 如一节课、一次郊游活动、一场晚会、一场体育比赛等等 。
也可是观看某场电影、电视剧或阅读某一篇文章后的体会等 。写英语日记要注意下面几点：
一、英语日记的格式
英语日记通常由两部分组成 ， 即书端和正文 。
书端指写日记的日期、星期和天气 。英语日记的书端顶格写在正文上边的左边 。
先写星期 ， 再写日期 。日期的写法与书信的相同 。天气可写在正文的右上方或写在日期之后 。
通常用形容词如Fine, Cloudy, Rainy, Windy, Foggy等 。
二、英语日记的时态
由于日记记载的事情通常已经发生过 ， 谓语动词多用一般过去时态 。
三、写日记正文时应注意的问题
1. 考试中所给的话题作文通常把词数控制在100-120个单词 。
2. 主题要突出 。整篇日记要围绕一个主题来展开 。切忌面面俱到 ， 记流水帐 。
因此 ， 要精心选择内容 ， 记下最有意义的、感受最深的内容 。