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首先,公布野渡征联上一期的优秀应征作品名单。
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上一期的征联题目是“鱼争风月频冒泡”,邀对下联。
经粉丝们的认真评选,下列作品获得了优秀对句作品称号。它们是:
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鱼争风月频冒泡;
雁记春秋总返乡。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
虫趣娱欢爱晚晴。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
荷退铅华更脱俗。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
杏盼春光屡探头。
鱼争风月频翻水;
柳摆荷池漫弹琴。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
虎斗霜林独踏山。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
竹尚气节总出头。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
雁过云天总排兵。
鱼争风月频冒泡;(野渡)
水戏浮云敢张扬。(平和心态)
野渡:鱼争风月频冒泡;
子言:鸟辩阴晴乱发声。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
坐井观天多愁绪。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
鸟窥花心总叫春。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
水映星云总牵心。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
猫偷腥荤总隐形。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
谁步江湖不染尘。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
蜓恋江湖屡点水。
野渡:鱼争风月频冒泡;
行微:龙厌名利总隐光。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
鸟避冬寒向南飞。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
夜触抖音屡刷屏。
鱼争风月频冒泡;
梅斗冰雪暗送香。”
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总之,本期共收到应征对句作品将近一百比,大多数作品主题鲜明,构思精巧,对仗和格律比较严谨。只有少数作品立意不高,平仄明显失律。
下面,刊发野渡征联新一期的征联题目:
菊心荡漾争秋宠,邀对下联。
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“荡漾”,语出唐代诗人李白的《梦游天姥吟留别》诗问:“ 谢公宿处今尚在,渌水荡漾清猿啼。”意思是说,谢灵运以前住过的地方,遗址还在,这里山青水绿,碧波荡漾,猿猴的叫声凄凉。
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诗中的“荡漾”,指的是水波微动的样子。后来引申为思想或情绪起伏不定。如《水浒传》第一回:“罗衣荡漾红尘内,骏马驱驰紫陌中。”
又如现代汉语词汇:春心荡漾,歌声荡漾等等。
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“菊心荡漾争秋宠”的平仄格式是:
仄平仄仄平平仄。
建议它的下联平仄格式为:
仄仄平平仄仄平。
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也可不拘一格,自由联对。但尾字上仄下平的基本格式,还是需要注意的。
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