订正英语怎么写( 二 ) _订正

they think that Spring Festival Gala spend a lot of money 。这里不用that, think后面从句that 可以省略，但特指spring festival gala 要加the, spend是主语是人时候用的，物作主语的时候用cost，这里物是主语Spring FEstival Gala, They 这里非主语。
Their performance isn't in correspondence with（表演不符合大多数人的兴趣） the interesting of many people,especially old people.感觉像中式英语。although but 不能同时用，become a symbol in chinese mind，没弄明白你要说什么。
what a happy all family members get together to watching performance in festival in evening.这更是有语病，what a 什么是感叹句，这里无需，to 后面要加动词原形。It's a great moment for faily members get together and have some fun with the actor's performance of Spring Festival Gala in New Year's Eve. so 比as a result 更确切。
好了先怎么多吧。本人英语水平有限，只是根据您的大意写的，没expand太多您的essay. 若想提高英语作文，就多多阅读英语书刊，英语沙龙等都是不错的，看文章的时候别就图一乐，要仔细看句子的结构，时态，语法等。
还有好的句子要熟练地背下来，这样可以照猫画虎用到自己的作文里。
3.告诉我应该怎么订正,初一的英语作文My best friend is Xu Jincheng. She is twelve years old. She likes drawing pictures and singing and dancing. She is a studious girl. Everyday when classes is over, she go home immediately to do homework and read books.
Her mother is an editor. Her father is a policeman. She is my best friend!
多读多背培养语感。语法神马的不用太纠结，能做题就行
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