电函怎么写

1. 外贸电函的格式 写信人(买方)的姓名:Blair Bush;写信人的职务:进口部经理;写信人所在的公司及地址:The Electronics Trading Company, 620 Planet Road, Manchester, the U.K.收信人(卖方)的姓名:刘大山;收信人的职务:出口部经理;收信人所在的公司及地址:International Electronics Co., Ltd.,101 Fortune Street, Ningbo, China 写信日期:2011年5月5日主要内容:1)感谢卖方5月3日传真所报中华牌DVD机的实盘;2)认为所报价格及条件均令人满意 , 故寄上PA-808号购货确认书一式二份 , 要求卖方签退一份;3)告卖方 , 不久将通过Westminster National Bank, Manchester分行开立以卖方为受益人的45天期信用证 , 金额为25,000欧元(euros) , 汇票须随附全套运输单据 , 包括提单 , 商业发票 , 保险单及中国产地证;4)装运完毕要求用传真或电子邮件告买方 。
2. 外贸电函的格式 1. 写信人(买方)的姓名:Blair Bush;写信人的职务:进口部经理;写信人所在的公司及地址:The Electronics Trading Company, 620 Planet Road, Manchester, the U.K.
2. 收信人(卖方)的姓名:刘大山;收信人的职务:出口部经理;收信人所在的公司及地址:International Electronics Co., Ltd.,101 Fortune Street, Ningbo, China
3. 写信日期:2011年5月5日
4. 主要内容:
1)感谢卖方5月3日传真所报中华牌DVD机的实盘;
2)认为所报价格及条件均令人满意 , 故寄上PA-808号购货确认书一式二份 , 要求卖方签退一份;
3)告卖方 , 不久将通过Westminster National Bank, Manchester分行开立以卖方为受益人的45天期信用证 , 金额为25,000欧元(euros) , 汇票须随附全套运输单据 , 包括提单 , 商业发票 , 保险单及中国产地证;
4)装运完毕要求用传真或电子邮件告买方 。
3. 外贸电函的格式 电子信函在文法上的10项注意
给各位一点提示
1.切忌主客不分或模糊 。例子: Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 应改为 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀 ,  不是report.)
2.句子不要凌碎 。例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 应该连在一起.
3.结构对称 , 令人容易理解 。例子: The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为: The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract.
4.单众数不要搞乱 , 不然会好刺眼 , 看不舒服 。例如: An authorized person must show that they have security clearance.
5.动词主词要呼应 。想想这两个分别: 1.This is one of the public-relations functions that is underbudgeted. 2. This is one of the public-relations functions, which are underbudgeted.
6.时态和语气不要转变太多 。看商务英语已经是苦事 , 不要浪费人家的精力啊 。
7.标点要准确 。例如: He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment.
8.选词正确 。像affect和effect,operative和operational等等就要弄清楚才好用啦 。
9.拼字正确 。有电脑拼字检查功能后 , 就更加不能偷懒 。
10.大小写要注意.非必要不要整个字都是大写 , 除非要骂人 。例如: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样 。要强调的话 , 用底线 , 斜字 , 粗体就可以了 。