1. 这个英语作文怎么写 I am just trying to say thank you.thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love you've shown to us.
I am lucky to have a teacher like you. and no matter what kind of person i will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and even how to be a man. From you I learned what kind of person i want to be and what should i get from life. this means everything to me.
my dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and i will remember what i have learned from you and carry the knowleges through my life!
2. 英语作文怎么写 英语作文的基本要求: 首先 , 一个段落必须有一个中心 , 即主题思想 , 该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达 。
整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic) , 这就是段落的统一性(unity) 。其次 , 一个段落必须有若干推展句 , 使主题思想得到充分展开 , 从而给读者一个完整的感觉 , 这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness) 。
再者 , 一个段落不是杂乱无章的 , 而是有机的组合 , 句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑 , 从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth) , 这就是连贯性(coherence) 。根据文章题目以及你所想要表示的意思下手 , 下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明 。
1、统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心 , 任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的 。请看下例: Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句 , controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country 。
文中出现两个irrelevant sentences , 一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie , 这一段是讲的是Joe and I , 中间出现一个Bella是不合适的 。还有 , Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关 。
再看一个例子: My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit , 但段中有两个irrelevant sentences , 一个是I bought two new suitcases last week , 另一个是My mother was a premature baby 。从上面两个例子可以看出 , native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences 。
卷面上如果这种句子多了 , 造成偏题或离题 , 那问题就更严重了 。2、完整性 正象我们前面说得那样 , 一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现 , 如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实 , 就不能构成一个完整的段落 。