英语和我的作文怎么写啊( 二 )


(3)句子是否有语法结构错误 , 特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误 。(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯 , 是否达意 。
(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰 , 词数是否基本上符合要求 。经过认真修改润色的短文 , 即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上 。
抄好后再速读一遍 , 力求完美 。经典题例下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例 , 谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项 。
原题介绍目前 , 扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity) 。作为一个中学生 , 我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢?我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(makecontributionto)呢?请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文 。
Nowadays , ________________________________________________________________解题步骤第一步:认真审题 , 明确写作体裁、提示要点、文章的时态、人称和词数 。分析:这篇作文的体裁是倡议书 。
文章主要有5大提示要点 , 考生可以用笔将这些要点圈出来 。1.扬州正在创建全国文明城市 。
2.作为一个中学生在学校怎么做才能称得上是一个文明的人?3.作为一个中学生在家怎么做?4.作为一个中学生在公共场所怎么做?5.我们又如何为这个活动作贡献呢?这篇文章时态以一般现在时为主 。人称用第一人称 。
词数100个左右 。第二步:分析提示要点 , 用简明的英语写出要点 。
分析:五大提示要点只有第一要点是限定的 , 考生可以直接翻译 。其余四大要点都是半限定的、半开放性的 。
考生需要根据文章主题的需要联系实际生活进行适当发挥 。不同的考生会有不同的答案 。
这部分既是写作的重点也是难点 。考生可用简明的英语写出要点 。
如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.第三步:列出写作提纲 , 并将要点扩展成句 。开头( 。
2.英语作文50字带翻译My favorite holiday is New Year, Chinese New Year we can eat dumplings and a lot of good things to eat, but alsoReceive lucky money, parents will accompany us to the amusement park, parks,We are very happy New Year everyone likes, and I also like the Spring Festival. 我最喜欢的节日是春节 , 在春节我们可以吃饺子和很多好吃的东西 , 还可以收到压岁钱父母还会带我们去游乐园 , 公园 , 所有人都会很开心 , 所有人都喜欢春节 , 我也非常喜欢春节 。
3.英语作文怎么写英语作文怎么写? 相对于英语的其它题目 , 作文的综合要求可能更高一点 , 那么我们就以这次考试的作文为例子来讲讲英语作文怎么写. 首先我先说说同学们在做作文的时候常常遇到的问题 , 然后我再给出一个大概的解决方法 , 最后呢 , 我们联系这次考试的作文题来实战一番. 从我们题目的要求来看 , 是一个记事的记叙文 , 并且是一个看图说话类的 , 所有的素材都在我们的图片里面了.那么我们就要先把图片仔细的看一下 , 选好线索 , 显然图片里面的钟暗示我们选择时间为我们的叙事线索.其次要选择好一个时态的问题 , 我们可以以晚上回忆的方式来叙述这个事情 。那么都是过去时 。那么开头是一个比较困难的事情 , 大家也许不知道从何说起.这里我给出了一个例子. Our class had already planned to go to Handian Nursing Home to visit those old people living there . We were all eager to go there as soon as we can. And today this time really came, so you could image how happy we were. At about 8:00 in the morning , with tools in hands, we went out of our school towards the Handian Nursing Home 下面我们不必过多的描述在路上的情形 , 我们重点将描述在敬老院里面的情形. It was about 9:00 when we arrived there. Though we were a little tired, none of us wanted to have a rest. As some of those old people seldom came out, so some of us helped them walk around to breathe the fresh air. Some help them to wash their clothes, and the others swept the ground. Most of us never do such things at home, so we maybe didn't do these well, but we all tried our best. At about 11:55,we had lunch with them, and our monitor stood for us to bless them devoutly. During the lunch time, we were all very happy. After lunch, we had a party with those old people. Before we came here, we had already prepared some songs for them. As we expected, they all felt great pleased with our programs. Though maybe we didn't performed well, the smile on their faces made us very happy. 该到说再见的时候了 , 一定要注意收尾工作. Happy time always goes fast. Though we didn't notice that we had stayed here for a long time, the clock on the wall informed us clearly that it was time for us to go home. So we had to say good bye to those old people. On the way home, we all said this was really a significant day, and we decided to come back again whenever we had time.